오잉톡 영어 피드백 모음(10-2020)

 

 

 

 

10-06-2020

 

 

X. I sleep late in holiday

/. I feel really tired because I usually slept

X. I have rivalry my mom

/. My mom and I fought last holiday because I didn't come to our house.

X. She don't want a I'm sleep here

/. My mom is conservative so she doesn't want me to sleep in my boyfriend's place.

X. He have own his house and BMW and bought expensive cosmetics

/. I've heard that he has his own house, BMW and bought her expensive cosmetics.

 

 

 

 

10-08-2020

 

 

X. I made chicken

/. I ordered delivered chicken for my dinner tonight.

X. I'm going to nail shop

/. I'm going to salon to get my nails polish tomorrow.

X. My sister is trouble her company

/. My sister is in trouble now in her company.

X. She decide to more work

/. She decided to continue working in the company.

 

 

 

10-13-2020

 

 

X. We drink at 3 AM

/. My boyfriend, my sister and I drank alcohol until 3 AM last weekend.

X. They doesn't meet

/. They're not able to meet because they are working.

X. My boyfriend give flower to her

/. My boyfriend gave her a flower but she just torn it apart.

 

 

 

 

10-15-2020

 

X. I have part time job

/. I'm a bit busy now because I have my part time job.

X. to my client I just preview

/. I'll just preview the finish product to my client.

X. 4 years

/. We've been together for 4 years but I just have met his family once.

X. I want he will a lot of money

/. I want him to earn more money so I'll just work from home wen

 

 

 

 

2020-10-20

 

X. Maybe next year

/. Maybe, I'll move to another grammar.

X. When I go to home my mother is sleeping and my sister was food store

/. I'm not able to talk with my mother last weekend because when I arrived home she was already sleepin

X. My computer is 10 years

/. I already have my personal computer for 10 years.

 

 

 

 

 

 

10-22-2020

 

 

X. I have appointment on Saturday

/. My boyfriend and I will be having an appointment with his friends on Saturday.

X. We are cancel and we not meet

/. We supposed to meet his friends but it was cancelled so I'll just make another appointment with my friend.

X. I buy clothes and order food

/. I use credit card a lot to buy clothes and order food so I'm worried now.

X. they fight last day evening

/. My sister called me yesterday evening because my mom and dad were fighting.

 

 

 

 

 

 

10-27-2020

 

 

X. I live Seoul I didn't go typhoon

/. I'm living in Seoul so I haven't experience strong typhoon.

X. When I saw some drama I just hear and thinking

/. When I'm watching an English drama before I just listen and think about it many times.

X. He wants I live his house

/. He wants me to live together with him in his house.

 

 

 

 

 

 

10-29-2020

 

 

 

X. I'm not work tomorrow

/. I feel good because I'll not work tomorrow.

X. I have a lot of work

/. I have to work hard in my part time job because I need to earn more money.