오잉톡 영어 피드백 모음(02-2021)

2021-02-02

 

X. My friend want me to teach piano so I learn how to play piano

/. My friend wanted me to learn how to play piano so she taught me how to do it.

X. My father re-marriage

/. My father remarry for five times with different women.

 

 

 

 

2021-02-04

 

X. I make web design and some paper

/. I made a web design and printed some instructions notice.

X. I will nothing to do

/. I will do nothing but to watch movies on Netflix.

X. My parents is very very strict

/. My parents are very strict.

 

 

 

 

 

2021-02-09

 

X. My manager want to work quickly

/. My manager always wants me to work fast because she's quite impatient.

X. Recently, I revenge her

/. Recently, I took revenge on her.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

2021-02-16

 

 

X. I visit my grandmother cemetery today

/. My father and I visited my grandmother's grave in the cemetery today.

X. I buy the chair three

/. I bought three posture corrector chair for my parents and boyfriend.

X. today eat dinner with father

/. I ate dinner with my father today.

 

 

 

 

 

 

2021-02-18

 

 

X. I buy piano but I'm not open it

/. I bought a brand new piano but I haven't opened it yet because I'm not feeling well.

X. It is showing a before and after picture

/. I made a video which shows before and after documentary pictures of the models.

X. She don't share her emotion

/. My step mother doesn't usually share her feelings and emotion.

 

 

 

 

 

 

2021-02-23

 

X. I working

/. I was just working these past few days.

X. just boring days

/. I just had normal; and boring days last week

X. You should be good person

/. We need to be a better person before we find good friends.

 

 

 

 

 

 

2021-02-25

 

X. I'm so exciting

/. I'm so excited for this long weekend because I have to study.

X. if the baby is like me

/. I don't want to get pregnant because the baby might be like me.